UPDATED VERSION OF STORIES OF LOVE AND BEAUTY

I suggested the following corrections to be incorporated in the text of my book Stories of Love and Beauty. They did it perfectly. Improved version of this book is going for second print run now with a different paper. The weight of the book would be less than the earlier one due to the imported buff paper. Those looking forward for this improved version may contact the publisher on how to get it.

Page No	Where it occurred?	Error	Suggested correction
2	Copyright statement	Wrong usage	© 2010 Datla Chiranjeevi Raju
4	About the Author	No full stop after the mention of my blog site but semi colon.	Insert full stop (.) in the place of semi colon. Then the following sentence would be He can be contacted at rajayogi@live.com. Insert full stop at the end of this sentence that is after my email id.
27	Paragraph 1, Line 6	Consider me as a two-year old kid…	two-year-old
27	Paragraph 1, Line 8	…you are also some four-year old kid…	four-year-old
29	Paragraph 1, Line 2	…50 percent of the people that…	people, who
31	Paragraph 2, Line 1	We will secretly kill the rogues that make…	rogues, who
34	Paragraph 1, Line 8	…justifiably punish every member that goes…	member, who
34	Paragraph 1, Line 17	irrationalism	irrationality
37	Paragraph 2, Line 19	“Any girl, that considers…	who
38	Paragraph 2, Line 2	“A service that can’t be described…	service, which
51	Paragraph 4, Line 2	…a tastiest substance that was…	substance, which
53	Last Paragraph, Line 6	Artistic excellence that is quite…	excellence, which
58	Paragraph 1, Line 2	She caressed…	kissed
71	Paragraph 1, Line 4	So, imagine that a 20-year old girl	20-year-old
71	Paragraph 1, Line 5	marrying a 16-year old boy soon.	16-year-old
85	Paragraph 1, Line 6	… a mother when I caress the rosy…	kiss
92	Last Paragraph, Line 2	…demolish anything…	everything
109	Paragraph 1, Line 2	I am a 16-year old boy and …	16-year-old
110	Paragraph 3, Line 1	do not pick up…	Insert You before first sentence in this paragraph.
114	Paragraph 2, last line	strength from open air	Insert full stop (.) at the end of last word.
125	Paragraph 3, Line 20	…one attributes value to it in with a..	delete in
141	Paragraph 1, Line 18	…rare fruits can be had from the orchids…	replace the word orchids with gardens
147	Paragraph 2, Line 14	courtesy sake	The letter c and o are not appearing clearly here. Rectify it.
174	Paragraph 3, Line 3	…places by walk.	Replace by walk with on foot.
174	Paragraph 3, Line 11	his for formality sake	Replace his with him
204	Paragraph 2, Line 7	stress that led.him	Delete full stop (.) between led and him and keep single space between these two words.
220	Paragraph 1, Line 8	…with a full sleeved shirt…	Replace full sleeved with long-sleeved
220	Paragraph 1, Line 9	…jeans pants.	Delete the word pants.
234	Last Paragraph, Line 1	I: He recently …	Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
236	Last Paragraph, Line 1	I: It is easy for…	Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
238	Paragraph 4, Line 1	I: How can I forget	Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
240	Paragraph 4, Line 1	I: When a rocket	Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
242	Paragraph 3, Line 1	I: Nobody can…	Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
254	Paragraph 3, Lines 9 and 10	that local fresh beverage…	fresh local beverage (change the order of words)
258	Paragraph 1, Line 12	four- year-old	four-year-old (delete space between – and year
258	Last Paragraph, Line 5	…two trees years ago for them.	the letter f is not printed clearly in the word for here.
275	Last Paragraph, Line 2	…using my energy that remained …	energy, which
276	Paragraph 2, Lines 4 and 5	My hands that touched …	hands, which
277	Paragraph 1, Line 4	her name is.Kailasini	Delete full stop (.) between is and Kailasini and retain single space between these two words.
277	Paragraph 1, Line 11	…earthly heaven that carried …	heaven, which
280	Paragraph 3, Line 1	reams remain beautiful…	Insert D before reams.
286	Paragraph 3, Line 1	…to die happily after caressing	Replace caressing with kissing
289	Paragraph 2, Line 5	He meditated for God for not less …	Insert Every day before He meditated. So, the rectified sentence must be Every day he meditated for God for not less than…
290	Last Paragraph, Line 7	…the mysteries in your life today.	Replace today with now.
290	Last Paragraph, Line 8	…live virtuously today to have …	Replace today with now.
300	The title of the story	JIPS	It must be JIMS
313	Paragraph 2, Lines 1 and 2	…Hindu saint during our little stroll…	Replace little with short
317	Last Paragraph, Line 5	…appreciating the achievement of stars in their times.	Replace achievement with achievements
371	Last Paragraph, Line 1	I started the story “Silanyasa Saisavam…	Replace Silanyasa with Silaranya