June 30, 2011

UPDATED VERSION OF STORIES OF LOVE AND BEAUTY


I suggested the following corrections to be incorporated in the text of my book Stories of Love and Beauty. They did it perfectly. Improved version of this book is going for second print run now with a different paper. The weight of the book would be less than the earlier one due to the imported buff paper. Those looking forward for this improved version may contact the publisher on how to get it.

Page No
Where it occurred?
 Error
Suggested correction
2
Copyright statement
Wrong usage
© 2010 Datla Chiranjeevi Raju
4
About the Author
No full stop after the mention of my blog site but semi colon.
Insert full stop (.) in the place of semi colon. Then the following sentence would be He can be contacted at rajayogi@live.com. Insert full stop at the end of this sentence that is after my email id.
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Paragraph 1, Line 6
Consider me as a two-year old kid…
two-year-old
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Paragraph 1, Line 8
…you are also some four-year old kid…
four-year-old
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Paragraph 1, Line 2
…50 percent of the people that
people, who
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Paragraph 2, Line 1
We will secretly kill the rogues that make…
rogues, who
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Paragraph 1, Line 8
…justifiably punish every member that goes…
member, who
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Paragraph 1, Line 17
irrationalism
irrationality
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Paragraph 2, Line 19
“Any girl, that considers…
who
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Paragraph 2, Line 2
“A service that can’t be described…
service, which
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Paragraph 4, Line 2
…a tastiest substance that was…
substance, which
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Last Paragraph, Line 6
Artistic excellence that is quite…
excellence, which
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Paragraph 1, Line 2
She caressed
kissed
71
Paragraph 1, Line 4
So, imagine that a 20-year old girl
20-year-old
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Paragraph 1, Line 5
marrying a 16-year old boy soon.
16-year-old
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Paragraph 1, Line 6
… a mother when I caress the rosy…
kiss
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Last Paragraph, Line 2
…demolish anything
everything
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Paragraph 1, Line 2
I am a 16-year old boy and …
16-year-old
110
Paragraph 3, Line 1
do not pick up…
Insert You before first sentence in this paragraph.
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Paragraph 2, last line
strength from open air
Insert full stop (.) at the end of last word.
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Paragraph 3, Line 20
…one attributes value to it in with a..
delete in
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Paragraph 1, Line 18
…rare fruits can be had from the orchids
replace the word orchids with gardens
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Paragraph 2, Line 14
courtesy sake
The letter c and o are not appearing clearly here. Rectify it.
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Paragraph 3, Line 3
…places by walk.
Replace by walk with on foot.
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Paragraph 3, Line 11
his for formality sake
Replace his with him
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Paragraph 2, Line 7
stress that led.him
Delete full stop (.) between led and him and keep single space between these two words.
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Paragraph 1, Line 8
…with a full sleeved shirt…
Replace full sleeved with long-sleeved
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Paragraph 1, Line 9
…jeans pants.
Delete the word pants.
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Last Paragraph, Line 1
I: He recently …
Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
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Last Paragraph, Line 1
I: It is easy for…
Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
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Paragraph 4, Line 1
I: How can I forget
Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
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Paragraph 4, Line 1
I: When a rocket
Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
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Paragraph 3, Line 1
I: Nobody can…
Make the highlighted text bold (I:)
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Paragraph 3, Lines 9 and 10
that local fresh beverage…
fresh local beverage (change the order of words)
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Paragraph 1, Line 12
four- year-old
four-year-old (delete space between and year
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Last Paragraph, Line 5
…two trees years ago for them.
the letter f is not printed clearly in the word for here.
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Last Paragraph, Line 2
…using my energy that remained …
energy, which
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Paragraph 2, Lines 4 and 5
My hands that touched …
hands, which
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Paragraph 1, Line 4
her name is.Kailasini
Delete full stop (.) between is and Kailasini and retain single space between these two words.
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Paragraph 1, Line 11
…earthly heaven that carried …
heaven, which
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Paragraph 3, Line 1
reams remain beautiful…
Insert D before reams.
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Paragraph 3, Line 1
…to die happily after caressing
Replace caressing with kissing
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Paragraph 2, Line 5
He meditated for God for not less …
Insert Every day before He meditated. So, the rectified sentence must be Every day he meditated for God for not less than
290
Last Paragraph, Line 7
…the mysteries in your life today.
Replace today with now.
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Last Paragraph, Line 8
…live virtuously today to have …
Replace today with now.
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The title of the story
JIPS
It must be JIMS
313
Paragraph 2, Lines 1 and 2
Hindu saint during our little stroll…
Replace little with short
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Last Paragraph, Line 5
…appreciating the achievement of stars in their times.
Replace achievement with achievements
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Last Paragraph, Line 1
I started the story “Silanyasa Saisavam…
Replace Silanyasa with Silaranya

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